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Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)
Contributed by
petulinka
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 02:42:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You call him love
Feels like the journeys having ways typed deep into fate
the strong burst follows
be ready to D I E
no need to worry
just run across his bleeding blade
predicted future
still in the motion
f a a a a a lling
in love your shield is just appalling
his heart stopped
severe
strike
stopped
roses are leaning out your scull
and cold as ice youre beginning to get
no more living no more worries,
suffer is now your only dept
tabula rasa
eyes wide open heart wide close
terrific dreams are the sole thing you own
the last gasp left the ultimate dose
see, cadavers are scared to the last bone
trying to breathe and stop the staring
with oceans full of drops
heaven is pretty thou somehow
hell into your mind slowly pops
been there in paradise already like two three times
they are walking on you in dust thus turned
reborn new life feels what you earned
thou stuck between two words it seems youre now
one is the grief the other sorrow to be found
forget or die
your heart just stopped and salvation lost its meaning on the way
as effort has no sense as you know the prize youre sure youd pay
you tell him love
and die on the place
cos if the show continued, was real
youd lose him and nor death would safe what youd feel
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Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)
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by duff on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 02:46:27 PM AEST
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| A unique and refreshing write which is always a good thing. There is a style about this that is nice to see and there is so much between the lines that it makes you come back for another read. A different take on love and a well written piece. Well done. |
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Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)
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by Anbarean on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 11:36:31 AM AEST
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I love it so nice and well written.
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Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)
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by StacyLynnG on
Monday, 14th February 2011 @ 10:34:46 AM AEST
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"suffer is now your only dept"
Lovely and unique! Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Forget or die(oublie ou meurt)
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 03:03:23 AM AEST
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Very strong piece.
Full of mood.
I liked it
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