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Itch
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 02:09:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Itch
Castle cross the bridge
Ocean, scars, and skin
Trembling at the touch
Of encapsulated cars
Collapsing
Anorectic beauty,
Scratch away your
Thoughts
Hide!
Your eyes deceive you
Frail hands fall
Where love will not touch you
Lift up your eyes
Touch me,
My warmth is gone,
Hold me
All I see is tired
Death and love
Mountains cross the sky
Somewhere near the end
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2010-11-25 02:09:03]
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Re: Itch
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 02:42:56 AM AEST
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Abe,
It's always nice to see a post from you.
I love this part
Anorectic beauty,
Scratch away your
Thoughts
luv it
Big huggs, Blessings and Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours
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Re: Itch
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by duff on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 09:54:16 PM AEST
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This is abstract indeed. A journey for heart and soul.
Mountains cross the sky
Somewhere near the end
I really like that line.
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