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Pause in Perfection
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 05:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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From across the room I watch socially
A genius trying to shed the blueprint
These front door handshakes stifle
Its difficult to watch her try so hard
Shy from afar control waivers
Victorian acclaim her effort is valid
Communication breakdown again
Shes already achieved their wishes
Shots call on skin to write tomorrow
Her bad religion boasting jack and beam
The so-called freak invites all to whisper
Embarrass me bright says the brain
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-11-25 17:15:18]
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Re: Pause in Perfection
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 07:04:51 PM AEST
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As always you bring up something differet and nice....words are perfect ....poetry over all is perfect...just love it...
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Re: Pause in Perfection
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by potentialpoet96 on
Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 08:54:18 PM AEST
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| nice. i like it. |
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Re: Pause in Perfection
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 03:10:15 AM AEST
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| Intresting |
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Re: Pause in Perfection
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 05:00:53 AM AEST
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| This is a very interesting piece. Well thought out and brilliantly executed. Fine poetry indeed. |
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Re: Pause in Perfection
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by nikolejones on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 05:07:44 PM AEST
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| Very interesting, well written and deep. |
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