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Shooting Stars <3
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
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Thursday, 25th November 2010 @ 08:51:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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raindrops on the window,
thunder booming loud!
every cloud becoming dark,
every tree waving in the wind.
i sit on my bed,
watching the rain,
drop by drop..
my face and shirt get wet,
as i stick my head out the window.
hoping in midafternoon,
i could find a shooting star.
one for a wish,
one is all i need.
to wish for you,
to love me.
<3
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Re: Shooting Stars <3
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by duff on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 09:33:51 PM AEST
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This was a real pleasure to read. I can picture everything and the scenery is gorgeous. Each line clicked with the next and it's a fine write.
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