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Unrequited Freedom
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:04:54 AM in AEST
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Free to soar in the sadness,
Free to drown in the pain,
Free to revel in madness,
Free to cry in the rain.
Free to stare in the silence,
Free to unleash all your rage,
Free to break out in violence.
Free to rattle your cage.
Free to appreciate beauty,
Free to make love or make war,
Free to neglect all your duties,
Free is the life you ignore.
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deusdeira
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2010-11-26 04:04:54]
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Re: Unrequited Freedom
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:56:48 AM AEST
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| Very nice writing this. I love the flow and rhyme and share your sentiments absolutely. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: Unrequited Freedom
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by duff on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 06:16:16 PM AEST
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Something precious that is taken for granted on such a large scale that it can be mind blowing. Everything seems to be so trivial. A strong write that grabs the attention. Well done.
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