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YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME
Contributed by
chrisdavid
on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 02:21:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I just want to hold you close
To feel you everyday
I just want to see you dance
And hear each word you say
These are hopes and dreams I have
Of a love I'll never see
All I know is you will not love me
I just want to tell you how
You make my heart race
I just want to stand with you
In this open space
It is pointless for me to say
How I'd like it to be
All I know is you will not love me
Why do I feel this way
When I look at you?
Why am I all alone?
What can I do?
I just want to let you go
And forget you exist
But my mind is racing round
Of things that I might miss
I should just get on with my life
And end this fantasy
Because I know you will never love me
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2010-11-27 02:21:54]
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Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME
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by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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| This tore at my heart. The Love you can give someone, but you never get it in return... I know how that feels. |
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Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 04:10:16 PM AEST
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So sad but I know the feeling.
Love sucks some times.
Great writing even in the sadness.
Personally I think cupid should practice more on the target before he starts shooting arrows at random.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: YOU WILL NEVER LOVE ME
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by Fern on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 01:03:12 PM AEST
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| It's such a sad fact of life to love someone and not be loved in return. It happens to almost everyone. But...after wallowing in your misery for a while, pick yourself up and mount a new search. There's someone who will love you so very much...someone that you've not yet met. Your poem is excellently written. I've read it and re-read it several times. You have a wonderfully honest and direct way of describing what your poem is all about. Hope you find true love, and I hope for our sake (your audience) that you continue writing poetry. |
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