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Welcome to distress
Contributed by
sporty
on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 11:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sometimes I toss and turn in my bed;
Just cant sleep
Pictures still burnt in my head
Walls of screaming red and they keep
Saying my name
I never even caught a single zed
Im in pain, Im still alive
But in reality I might as well be dead
Without your strength
I cant find my own
Without you on earth
I cant call it home
Without you here
Id just be all alone
Id be in a mountain of mess
I wouldnt handle it well
Youd see a red fountain of stress
Gushing out my neck
Id be 6 feet underground
Youd be wearing a black dress
Then you would be the one
That I would depress.
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2010-11-28 23:19:05]
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Re: Welcome to distress
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 28th November 2010 @ 11:37:53 PM AEST
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Very unique write that left no stone un covered.
Awesome writing.
Welcome to YPDC.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Welcome to distress
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 29th November 2010 @ 12:36:45 AM AEST
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| Is this about someone who already left you? or are telling someone that you don't want them to leave? Either way I liked it a lot. |
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