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Disillusionment
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 03:54:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Disillusionment
When you get your hopes up
When you put your best foot forward
When you believe that this is it
When circumstances decree
When you go for a new direction
When your hopes and dreams are torn to tatters in the blink of an eye or a word spoken by another
The disillusionment is unbelievable
Why have you shattered my dreams?
Why with words spoken do I feel so low and dejected?
Infected with sorrow and pain
Like reaching the top and finding youre not even halfway there
Disillusioned, dejected, disappointed
Regroup, rethink, react, and respond
Disillusionment will not break me
Im made of stronger stuff
By banjosandwitch 01/09/10
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2010-11-30 03:54:48]
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Re: Disillusionment
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by Fern on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 05:50:11 AM AEST
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| Wow! How many times in our lives have most of us had to deal with disappointing, sometimes even tragic consequences. You have articulated brilliantly in your last three lines, and with the golden words of the poet you are, that redemption is always possible: "I'M MADE OF STRONGER STUFF!" "DISILLUSIONMENT WILL NOT BREAK ME!" I think you're incredibly insightful, and an absolutely brilliant wordsmith! |
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Re: Disillusionment
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 06:21:15 AM AEST
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| Empowering words spoken with the insight of having felt the pain the hurt and the anger, an inspiring write well written |
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Re: Disillusionment
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 08:54:20 AM AEST
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your words speak so loud it's infectious..the thought, the emotion..your words leave me feeling just like you..wanting to scream at the top of my lungs, "I'M MADE OF STRONGER STUFF!" "disillusionment will not break me.."
you are and incredible writer. |
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