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I Shouted To Her Repeatedly
Contributed by
fern
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 06:24:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I hadn't seen her in years-
so when I thought I spotted her
on a crowded city sidewalk
that cold December afternoon,
I shouted to her repeatedly:
"MAGDALENA! MAGDALENA!"
"Was it you...was it you?"
I sobbed,
as she quickly disappeared
in the large crowd of Christmas shoppers.
And then I screamed:
"DEAR MERCIFUL GOD! WAS IT YOU?"
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2010-11-30 06:24:26]
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Re: I Shouted To Her Repeatedly
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 08:49:46 AM AEST
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| this is very short, but it is SO emotional and full of anguish, and frustration..i love it..you have no idea how much i love it.. |
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Re: I Shouted To Her Repeatedly
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by MusicksPrincessa on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 04:03:30 PM AEST
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| oh my gosh i can feel the pain the hurt from those lines. i loved it so much |
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