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Waves of Love
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 02:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A rippling breeze across my skin,
Thoughts of her turn me within,
And while I sit and contemplate,
On destiny, and on our fate,
I still see her deep green eyes,
And like the tide, they fall and rise,
The love in them is like a wave,
It reached its peak, and it did cave,
It washed my soul upon the shore,
Where it will stay forever more,
Until another wave does come,
And then her spell will be undone.
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2010-11-30 14:09:22]
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Re: Waves of Love
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by duff on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 07:46:29 PM AEST
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The ocean has such a tranquil effect and you captured the very essence and adding love to that mix just makes for a very enjoyable read. Well done.
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Re: Waves of Love
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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what a beauty you put in this poem with magic of words....
I enjoy it and love it
wow
Take Care
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Re: Waves of Love
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 10:05:37 AM AEST
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| very nice imagery and i can feel it as i read it, well done. |
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Re: Waves of Love
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by whitt on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:57:01 PM AEST
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agreed: great imagery :)
its very well written
keep up the great poetry :) |
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