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False Perception
Contributed by
Jonathon_J_Young
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Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:54:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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If you peer upon my face it seems so clear the hate in place,
Is it absurd, or a disgrace? To have these thoughts thats so debase.
It seems perception has done its deed, but my words you have to heed,
The way you think; there is no need. Though your thoughts I may accede.
Its a pain that dwells within, that takes my soul for all my sin,
And leaves this wound so deep herein where heart and love at once had been.
Ive seen some sorrows that make me cold a broken heart made that fourfold.
Maybe my love was undersold, nevertheless its uncontrolled.
The trials of life has made its affliction and struck me down with no restriction,
Its feels just like my crucifixion and left me with this drug addiction.
My joy in life was all I had; please dont judge quickly for Im not bad.
And even though it seems Im mad, deep inside Im truly sad.
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Re: False Perception
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 02:03:06 PM AEST
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| I can realate to this one quite well. It is written with an excellence. kudos! |
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Re: False Perception
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by duff on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 12:29:06 AM AEST
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Wow. You can feel the torment throughout this piece and there is plenty of emotion described in an intelligent manner. A very well written poem and a nice read.
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