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Strangers
Contributed by
duff
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Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 10:23:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Lost inside a puddles wrinkle I can see her face
Again she fades away like yesterdays passion
Sunsets over sandy footprints bullied by the storm
A sharpened thorn constantly poking at my insecurities
Come the nightfall she was always my rose
We took turns hurting one another without flinching nor
Caring about the transformation that would ensue
Destruction of character was crucial to purpose
She searched my eyes for one final kiss
And I wished for her tears to drown the hollow
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duff
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2010-12-02 22:23:41]
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Re: Strangers
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by Bexstasy on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 05:24:56 AM AEST
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| This is really deep... I love it! |
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Re: Strangers
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:52:16 AM AEST
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| Wow duff this is awesome. Deep indeed and with with love and loss, your words came across powerfully. Very nice |
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Re: Strangers
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by Outspoken on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 08:43:42 PM AEST
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| Excellent use of imagery. A thoroughly thought provoking read. |
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Re: Strangers
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 06:35:59 AM AEST
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Excellent again Duff.you always suck me in and leave me thinking.
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Re: Strangers
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
Once again you have taken me on a journey of fine words and inner most thoughts. Absolutely brilliant. Well done. |
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Re: Strangers
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by ming on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 07:18:44 PM AEST
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Your words always swirl me around the one MAIN statement..."A sharpened thorn constantly poking at my insecurities"
And this was the one the jumped out and grabbed me by the throat. Please squeeze out MORE!
ming
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