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Dreams
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 05:21:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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You're in my dreams,
Every single night,
I see shooting stars,
And the moon so bright,
I breathe the air,
Taking in each scent,
Making the most of,
This time I've been lent,
I hear your footsteps,
As you walk up behind me,
The crunching and crackling,
Of the corpses of leaves,
I feel your hand,
As our fingers entwine,
I feel so happy knowing,
You're here and you're mine,
I taste your soft lips,
As they brush against my own,
But then we're interrupted,
-The shrill ringing of a phone,
I make one last wish,
As my dream fades away,
I always wish you'd be here,
But in my dreams you will stay.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-12-03 05:21:54]
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Re: Dreams
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by nirupam on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
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| romantic, intimate, sensuous....really a charming piece of work.... |
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Re: Dreams
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by duff on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:26:07 AM AEST
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A delicate and sensual write that is gentle on the eyes. There is a ton of emotion revealed and it's very well written.
duff |
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Re: Dreams
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:49:46 AM AEST
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| Nice. Very sweet write. You have a great style |
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Re: Dreams
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 12:21:30 PM AEST
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Mmmmm!! Love is taking hold...I can feel it!!
Lovely write.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Dreams
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by shanat on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 04:32:59 PM AEST
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not only is it moveing its also soothing:)
thanks.
shanat:) |
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Re: Dreams
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:52:22 AM AEST
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aaawwww soooo beautiful....wow love it.
Great poem...I was reading and imagining and all of a sudden it came up with a new turn...
love it
wow
Take care
Anbarean |
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