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Distance Over Love
Contributed by
Jonathon_J_Young
on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 10:25:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I wish my body could travel just as fast as my text,
I wish by sight I could feel, so things werent so complex.
I talk to you day and night, which makes me so perplexed.
Id tell you how I feel, but my words arent in context.
The distance is the burden, which puts weight on my heart.
These thoughts that I cant shake, is whats tearing me apart.
I wish you knew just what I think; I know not where to start,
If only I could tell you this; if only Id impart.
Time is supposed to heal, then why do I get worse?
Is it love Im feeling? Or maybe its a curse.
The more it seems that you disclose; the longer we converse,
Captivates me deeply and makes me so immersed.
To desire what you cant acquire seems to set your soul afire,
But thats human behaviour thats expected to transpire.
But this seems so different; I know I am no liar.
My mind is the loud auctioneer; my heart is just the buyer.
I cant seem to hack this; my yearning is too great,
My thoughts of love and longing are entangled with my hate.
Why does it have to be this way? Our love could procreate.
I want you here my everything, my love, my dear soul mate.
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Jonathon_J_Young
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2010-12-04 10:25:44]
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Re: Distance Over Love
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by Anbarean on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 12:53:05 PM AEST
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Jonathon you did again and make a beautiful poem.
So nice and a wonderful one to read.
Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
Take care
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Re: Distance Over Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 07:00:46 PM AEST
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Incredible insight into what's happening in this write.
Shows much wisdom.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Distance Over Love
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by mehuel on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 10:36:14 AM AEST
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| beautiful write.. I especially loved the second last para.. "to desire what... ... ... My mind is a loud auctioneer, my heart is just a buyer".. So original... Good work... |
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