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Naked In The Rain
Contributed by
TheJMan
on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 08:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I am standing naked in the rain
It feels like peace pouring down
And when i close my eye's
I can see that feeling spreading around
Sometimes things are tough
But never out of reach
If only this rain were words
It would be so much easier to teach
But I'll stand naked in the rain
Proud of who i am
Thankful for that last push
And glad i took a stand
No one will stand with me
But all will wonder why
Everyone needs their own space
And the rain stretches far and wide
So stand naked in the rain
Let nature cleanse the worse
Stand naked in the rain
And see the feel of what its worth
Copyright ©
TheJMan
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2010-12-05 20:43:10]
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Re: Naked In The Rain
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by NewGuy on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 09:47:20 PM AEST
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| this is clever, and i get the feeling that there is some sort of literal inspiration for it |
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Re: Naked In The Rain
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by shanat on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 04:14:36 PM AEST
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theres just something supenatural about walking or just standing naked in the rain, ive done it plenty of times!, only in the summer tho:) Great write!
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Re: Naked In The Rain
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:40:11 PM AEST
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Beautiful work!
Yes there is something spiritual about raindancing and standing naked in the rain.
Nature is the best healer!
Michelle |
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