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Maze
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 06:29:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I would do anything for an honest song
Without the noise and fractal moments to chain me
I would spiral in motes that reach every truths edge
Weave around the lurking lies drowning all tenderness
I am paused, in my life around beauty that cant breathe
From searing minds, a million cracks on every one of my nights
I walk a bit further away each time, shrugging off minds
Not knowing if this life can hold on to me any longer
I see fabrics of every thought, entwined in gossamer hopes
Swinging in winds of eternal changes; wishes on rapids
Too hard to resist, the churn all too familiar and too painful
Storm-dancing into some realitys sodden pages
Damp, like faces whose tears never wore their sorrow
I clench and unclench in knots of every ancient lore
Turn to me Truth, look at me; I am your goddess
Your future ahead, the move that you wouldnt dare as yet
Take me in your arms; I would warm your icy lips
Rip your tarnished soul and birth you yet another time
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2010-12-06 06:29:40]
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Re: Maze
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by Voyager on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 08:11:22 AM AEST
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| Well written! I espeically liked the last 6 lines.....don't know what perespective you wrote it from, but it made a lot of sense to me at this point in my consciousness.... |
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Re: Maze
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by missAmeteur on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 03:02:15 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful. i got really tied up in the words you used, especially towards the end.
however, i'm having a hard time trying to comprehend the entire meaning
nevertheless, it's very nice! please keep writing! |
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