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The Threat
Contributed by
lady-quiet-dreamer
on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 08:15:16 PM in AEST
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My hidden pain surrounds me.
It covers and sufficates me.
I look around,
and almost drown.
My heart beats out of my chest.
Stomp on it and put me to rest.
My pain isn't hidden well.
If you see it swell.
Don't try to save me.
I'll survive, wait and see.
My heart is in tatters,
but that hardly matters.
You've pushed me to the limit.
You won't admit it.
I can see the edge of the grave.
Don't rant, don't rave.
I'll be gone soon,
maybe by the new moon.
You have killed my tender side.
Now run, now hide.
I'll be coming for you.
Then you know what i'll do.
I'll give you back the pain.
It will fall like rain.
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Re: The Threat
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by Njd1105 on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 08:25:29 PM AEST
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| Deep. Great write |
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Re: The Threat
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 10:37:58 PM AEST
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| Not bad for five minutes. I liked it. |
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Re: The Threat
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 02:28:03 AM AEST
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| Really good,I always find my best work comes easily and quickly.Its very easy to over think a poem. |
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Re: The Threat
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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Speed writer I like it lol!
I liked it all but the line my pain isn't hidden well THAT struck me!
We are all always trying to hide the depth of our feelings aren't we??
Well done
Michelle |
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Re: The Threat
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by shereal_14 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 06:58:06 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!!! I, too write poetry quickly. I can only write a poem when I'm feeling it, I can't jot down some stuff and come back later, I have to get it all out at once. Keep up the great work!!!
Sheryl |
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Re: The Threat
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by LovelChelsea on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:52:47 PM AEST
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| I'm so in love with this poem it's not even right O.o |
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