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Christmas Bug
Contributed by
Lyre
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Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 10:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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On my past Christmases,
There's so many promises,
But only few passes;
Here on my shrubby lair i hie,
Few days and I'll say good bye,
To a time i don''t own;
But soon certainly spring will come,
And be my soul roam,
Again as dire Christmas bug;
On all that I'd preach,
One had manage to reach:
To let me come back as I wish;
True,I come back after a death class,
But i covet the Christmas,
Every time away I pass;
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Lyre
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2010-12-06 22:22:10]
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Re: Christmas Bug
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 06:00:33 PM AEST
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Bah Humbug.
Heh. Just kidding. It's an interesting piece. keep writing.
always, abraham |
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Re: Christmas Bug
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:34:41 AM AEST
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quite different and interesting and love to read it.
Good Work
Good Efforts
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: Christmas Bug
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by Nonefound on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 03:15:41 AM AEST
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| I like that. |
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Re: Christmas Bug
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by LovelChelsea on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:54:44 PM AEST
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It's different.?.
You seem to be thinking something deep (obviously) and I like the way you put it into word's. |
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