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The beast
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 02:34:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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And the beast woke from his hibernation,
Coiling dark tendrils of need around conviction,
Leaving but a hole of smouldering dissolution.
And as it clambers out of it's prison,
All that has been created has no reason,
And ideas fragment like light in a prism,
As the night withdraws,
The beast retracts his claws,
Examine your flaws,
Yet time passes and the beast will slumber,
So content with it's lot, a teenage blunder,
A bride for life, I shouldn't wonder.
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2010-12-08 02:34:23]
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Re: The beast
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by duff on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 10:36:54 AM AEST
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It's always a pleasure to read something that creates stunning imagery and this piece does exactly that. Painful yet conveyed in a creative way you lure the reader into a piece about the demons that drive our cravings. Awesome write.
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Re: The beast
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 11:28:32 AM AEST
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Oh yeah!! We do have some very real similiarities in our work don't we!? Makes me wonder about how similar our lifestyles could be!!! Freat read! Keep writing and sgaring with me i love reading this stuff!!!
Peace,
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