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That Night
Contributed by
duff
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Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 11:32:59 AM in AEST
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Behind the smoke I watched her rise
Dark eyes lined with black mystery
Porcelain skin gliding in kimono sway
A naked flame writing off all prerequisites
Silk midnight resting on smooth shoulders
Fixated and searching for a glance to share
I slowly walk through spirits to breathe it in
Her essence daring my lips to wander home
Before I could speak she softly whispered
That moment bought us an eternity to spend
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2010-12-08 11:32:59]
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Re: That Night
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 01:53:35 PM AEST
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| This poem gives off a sense of mystery as well as beauty. I love it. |
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Re: That Night
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 03:15:46 PM AEST
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Very sweet.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: That Night
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by ari_monster on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST
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aww, this poem
is beautiful, sweet, and mysterious |
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Re: That Night
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 12:17:59 AM AEST
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such a beauty, without rhyme it still holds the flow...
love it as ever...
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: That Night
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:10:43 PM AEST
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| Some mystery and some temptation is what I'm picking up. Nice. |
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Re: That Night
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 11:19:01 PM AEST
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| has a very surreal feel to it...nicely done! |
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Re: That Night
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 03:07:13 AM AEST
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| beautiful and sexy |
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Re: That Night
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by Njd1105 on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:16:44 AM AEST
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Awesome.
Love your work. |
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Re: That Night
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by ming on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 08:36:30 AM AEST
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Wow! And again...wow! Can I steal this line?
'Dark eyes lined with black mystery' (J/K)
love this...
ming
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