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Salty Creek
Contributed by
Devy
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 04:41:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In just one forever moment in endless time
everything I swear I know is true
alters without consideration of my being
it knocks the wind right out of me
My heart beats on, tha-thump, tha-thump
but I cannot feel anymore, so numb
My lips become an obstacle for a newly formed salty creek
cold and wet, it runs down my ever so pale face
my stomach aches and drops at the thought
my heart stops when I can see it
My smile as only thought to be fable creeps up slowly
The memories appear like a sudden rush of cold air on a crisp autumn night
Quicker than any rocket in the world
the smile resides into remission
as for than, you realize they're just memories
and the salty creek thrives and flourishs
My mouth and body remain silent like the night
On the inside, I'm screaming and shouting
hysterically wondering why
why did i have to mess up, again
huff, huff, i breathe into my pillow
my pillow victmized by the salty creek
the rapids rage on and on, whoosh, whosh
they rage until they send me to sleep
sleep brings no redemption
the dark has only terror and pain to give
I gave all I had
and finally I'm recieving, getting it back
If only she could taste the salt scarred on my lips
she could taste the pain and frustration, the yelling, the screaming
maybe she could dry up this never ending creek
maybe she could erase time and make salty creeks become non exsistance
But as she made abundantly clear
that's a fairytale,
and fairytales never come true
They aren't real.
Rage on Salty creek, Rage on
Copyright ©
Devy
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2010-12-08 16:41:53]
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Re: Salty Creek
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 04:10:14 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC>
Sorry for your pain but good writing.
Blessings, healing,
emy |
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Re: Salty Creek
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:19:57 PM AEST
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| Wow, well written, but I have to ask, are you really this distraught from the relationship? I've only felt like this once, and to be honest after leaving that girl, things have been boring and bland. Well just remember that the first is the hardest. It gets easier. |
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