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Not a small world after all.
Contributed by
Devy
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Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 06:45:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The Fire burns and roars,
the Bird flys and soars,
The Clouds float and wonder
the Trees whisper and ponder
Its all alive you see
its not just you and me
its them and he
Its also they and she
they live amongst us too
and the Skies arent just blue
and the Trees arent just green,
now think, do you know what i mean?
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Devy
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Re: Not a small world after all.
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:56:31 PM AEST
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I know what you mean.
Wondering if you mean "live" as in Shintoism, or if you mean ever moving and changing. |
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Re: Not a small world after all.
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by duff on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:58:01 PM AEST
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Abstract and a write for the mind to chew on. Sadly, there are plenty of people who think they are the only ones out there and can't bring themselves to think outside the box that has consumed them. Creative and well written.
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Re: Not a small world after all.
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:40:32 PM AEST
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wow you move it very smoothly and end it up nicely.
Great Work
Take care Devy
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Re: Not a small world after all.
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by T-Bear on
Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 04:49:53 PM AEST
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| I love that it makes you think. |
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