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Outcasts
Contributed by
Sammys24
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Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:27:28 PM in AEST
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Who ever thought the tables would turn and we'd be the ones that people look at with pity
We use to look at them
As the broken ones
But they pointed the mirrors at us
And we were the ones that were shattered all along
How did it get like this?
No one really knows
Is it possible to mend all that has been shattered to pieces?
Only time will tell
What was once us all
Is now separated into little cliques
Betrayal.
Love.
Jealousy.
Insecurity.
Gossip.
Lies.
Frustration.
Sadness.
Anger.
Isolation.
Guilt.
Loneliness.
Abandonment.
And the forgotten acceptance of it all.
It's all driven us apart
Outcasts. All of us are outcasts.
In this world
Where we now
Walk alone.
Copyright ©
Sammys24
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2010-12-09 19:27:28]
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Re: Outcasts
(User Rating: 1 )
by duff on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:54:51 PM AEST
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A powerful write that brings up a valid point of just how much of a self absorbed world we live in. Everyone always out for themselves without a care. I like the style of the write and there are some really great lines here. Well done.
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Re: Outcasts
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:17:00 PM AEST
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wow superb.....you know time heals...mend broken pieces... but it leaves its scar...
I love reading your writting
Take care
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