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Still Searching
Contributed by
whitt
on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:34:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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im breaking into pieces
jumping off tall bridges
im drowning in deep seas
and fallin out of trees
im having these nightmares
its their meaning that scares
im trying to understand
but im too weak to stand
im giving up my dreams
it wasnt as easy as it seems
im forgetting old aspirations
someone give me directions
im losing feelings of thrill
letting go by my own will
im not important anyways
just sit and watch the days
im in need of inspiration
in search for the passion
im thinking of the past
confused on how ive last
im remembering the pain
an unstoppable freight train
im trying to believe in future
because now its what im after
Copyright ©
whitt
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2010-12-09 20:34:17]
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Re: Still Searching
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:38:09 PM AEST
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A bit sad but well done.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Still Searching
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
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Great one though sad but still enjoy your writting.
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: Still Searching
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 10:23:37 PM AEST
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| i like it! its honest. i can relate...been thru it b4.... |
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Re: Still Searching
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by MiaPeterson on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:52:11 AM AEST
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| Awww! It's so sad yet it's marvellous! Cheer up, everyone has a time in their life when they do through this! You'll get through it :) Just believe! |
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