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Losing Me
Contributed by
whitt
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Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:00:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i think im losing you its too hard to endure i dont know what to do its becoming unsure
when a risk comes around you replace me with a new i fade to your background and you fade from mine too
i want to know your excuse why do you forget im here your imagination is so loose i might as well disappear
i wonder what you'll do when im neither here nor there i bet you'll want me then i had promised to always care
some promises can disintegrate they dissolve just like time maybe it just wasnt our fate abandoning friendship is a crime
what else could i do im always your last pick but no more im through you better think quick
its either me and the years or the others and the fights you can make all your sneers im about to turn off the lights
i thought i was losing you finally i stepped into reality you wont agree that its true but the fact is you're losing me
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2010-12-09 21:00:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Losing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:10:20 PM AEST (User
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aaawww so pain in words but you know the way you think and put them together that makes you # 1
I hope things will be OK and bringhtness will be there for you
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: Losing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST (User
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Sad but a great write.
I hate it when some one takes me for granted.
Keep up the good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Losing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by MiaPeterson on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:53:47 AM AEST (User
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I get what you're going through, but I think you should e-mail your friend this to your friend. She has to be moved by these wonderful words! |
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Re: Losing Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by hungarianhaze on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST (User
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I feel you on this one! I had this happen with my Best friend ..its a shame..how things like that can happen..
Good luck in the future |
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