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Slow Down Baby Girl
Contributed by
whitt
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Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 06:30:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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theres a little girl, shes in her own little world
sitting in a little chair, with a little bow in her hair
a crayola sixty four pack, and a pink barbie backpack
states her numbers one to ten, and wants to write in pen
its time to slow down baby, you're journey is still on play
love and cherish free memories, always flee from treachery
keep your dreams and fantasies, smell the best daisies
your moving too fast, its too soon to create a past
shes sitting in her first car, she has come so far
tears come to her eyes, its amazing how time flies
she blows out sixteen flames, they're kodak frames
its a sad happy day, watching as she drives away
its time to slow down baby, you're journey is still on play
love and cherish free memories, and flee from treachery
keep the dreams and fantasies, smell the best daisies
your moving too fast, its too soon to create your past
she walks the stage up and down, in a cap and gown
dont worry you done your part, you gave her a headstart
five years in white she stands, they're holding each others hands
who knew this was the day, he would give his daughter away
now i cant controll your pace, you're ahead in the race
i see a little girl in a tutu, everytime i look at you
im the one cherishing memories, and fighting the bees
i wont let you forget about me, i send you daisies
Copyright ©
whitt
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2010-12-10 18:30:17]
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Re: Slow Down Baby Girl
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 06:39:42 PM AEST
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This is awesome.
You really do have a great insight to your father.
Keep up the great work.
You have a very unique way of writing that I find refreshing.
Blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Slow Down Baby Girl
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 10:34:23 PM AEST
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WOW very very nice, great work, new and different kind of style i read.
I love and enjoyed.
Take care
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Re: Slow Down Baby Girl
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 01:05:25 AM AEST
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| Touching, almost felt like a happy father myself, but then realized I'm much too young. Deserves to be a song. |
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