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Shades and Flame
Contributed by
xHeathenx
on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 11:58:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Glowing embers of burnt timber litter the sky,
As the life within the forest begins to die.
The rocks, moss, and streams shine bright,
All from the wild dancing firelight.
Young Nomads silhouettes wave and twist,
And Their breathing creates a chilling mist.
They slowly turn and take off with haste.
As they morph this village to utter waste.
The screams howl out in midnight air,
Along with smells of cooked flesh and hair.
The nomads dash away into the green,
And leave behind this grissly scene.
Citizens from young to old,
Embrace Deaths dark hold.
Stars do not shine their beloved light,
Not today on this horrid night.
Copyright ©
xHeathenx
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2010-12-11 23:58:47]
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Re: Shades and Flame
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 03:46:27 PM AEST
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very well written, moved very smoothly and love to read it.
Takecare
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Re: Shades and Flame
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by Lady_Daisy on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 09:12:29 PM AEST
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| The imagery is just majestic! Well done! |
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