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Sorry
Contributed by
Cocoxx
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Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 03:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Whisper in the stillness
I am sorry
Judging you
Without really knowing
And I told everyone
Everything I thought I knew
About of all your faults
Even those I couldnt find
Because finding my weaknesses
Was harder than to blame you
When I read that book
Read that line
Read that note
My heart broke in pain
Understanding you for the first time
Everything that youd done
Wasnt trying to hurt me
You just couldnt know
What it did to me
How I hurt
And I forgot the promises we made
When we were children
Always wanting to protect each other
Always wanting to stick together
Please dont tell me it is too late
Because even if you dont know it yet
Deep down
I still love you
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Cocoxx
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2010-12-12 15:48:51]
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Re: Sorry
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 04:20:19 PM AEST
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so nice and I hope your sister will understand your love and effection.
Sisters are sisters they fight but love still remains there and once again we become close together.
very nice and I like it.
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: Sorry
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by BeautyKiller on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 05:37:28 PM AEST
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| that's so sad.. but sweet. i'm glad that you feel that way about your sister. my brothers or sisters wouldn't do anything like that. if they read any of my poems they would laugh in my face. but your really sweet, to write this, i hope your sister forgives you and understands. |
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Re: Sorry
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by JohnnyFallen on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 06:42:12 PM AEST
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| I wish my little brother could understand me. Too bad he doesn't but he will eventually. I'm glad you understood each other. A sister is a friend and speaking of which, three of my friends I consider sisters. x] |
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Re: Sorry
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 09:08:22 AM AEST
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The last stanza is really touching - about sticking together as children. A very fine write. Hope, you aren't too late.
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: Sorry
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by T-Bear on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 04:48:29 AM AEST
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| I loved it! Your feelins come thru loud and clear. Great read. thank you. |
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