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Miserable Life
Contributed by
BeautyKiller
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Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 05:33:48 PM in AEST
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I want one day without pain
But i do enjoy the rain
I stand in it so people won't know that i'm crying
Inside i'm dying
Love is the only hope for me now
I hope love won't let me down
If it does it will be the end
I won't breathe again
My heart will stop beating
And everyone will start deceiving
And by everyone I mean no one
'Cause everyone will be shining like the sun
I'll be hiding away in the dark
Waiting for the pain to start
Again, but it'll be the last time
In this miserable thing we call life
Copyright ©
BeautyKiller
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2010-12-12 17:33:48]
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Re: Miserable Life
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by JohnnyFallen on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 06:33:42 PM AEST
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| I love it. I can somewhat relate to this, but I don't know for sure. Hope a hand reaches out and helps you. Take care. |
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Re: Miserable Life
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 09:01:19 PM AEST
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Pain for love...and love gives pain
Great one I like it
Takecare
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Re: Miserable Life
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by deusdeira on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 12:55:18 AM AEST
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I loved what you said about standing in the rain so people don't know you are crying.
In life we often have to hide our true feelings, and that described it very beautifully. |
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