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Lonely
Contributed by
duff
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Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 09:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The week begins in cold hallways
No one said how long to hide
Privileged clicks turning away
Stitched letters judge her type
Plain Jane and the wrong jeans
A naked wrist without a rose
Brutal case of weak versus mean
The family Freud explains the low
Broken bells and sharpened lead
Elitist hearts dish out beatings
Too depressed to get out of bed
Prozac beauty silently retreating
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-12-12 21:55:21]
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Re: Lonely
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 10:37:40 PM AEST
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Loneliness, sadness and depression is breaking its silence in your poem which make your poem WOW..
great poem
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: Lonely
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by xHeathenx on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 01:27:36 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem duff. You have quite way with word at making them seem straightforward, yet still mystic altogether. |
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