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Life Away From Life
Contributed by
Elementalkase
on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 09:32:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Laying here, I can believe
The ones I love, away from me
Stupid choices I have made
Turned my life to wasted days
Cannot think straight and don't know how
My life's off track, I finally see now
Time now passing, day by day
My mind gets up and walks away
As it treks down endless halls
Always finding dead-end walls
Needing guidance, it retreats
I sink lower into my sheets
I doze off and drift away
Dreaming to prosper again someday
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Elementalkase
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2010-12-17 09:32:58]
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Re: Life Away From Life
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by Mick_Puttock on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 01:38:26 PM AEST
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| nice write, I can relate to this one easily, due to errors I have made of late. |
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Re: Life Away From Life
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by Zeberdee on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST
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| Wow very good poem, I could really relate strongly to this poetry. Love this theme you create of hopelessness, isolation and melancholia. Good job! |
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