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Back to Black and White
Contributed by
00flynn
on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 10:14:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You took the spring from my step,
The sparkle from my eye.
You stole the colour from my view,
Its back to black and white because of you.
I see the sun, but it has no light,
I feel the sun, but it has no warmth,
You gave the world colour, trees green and skies blue,
Its back to black and white, because of you.
Black and white, day after day,
Alone, whatever I say
but once the dust settles,
youve left me better than you found me.
Its back to black and white, like before you.
Copyright ©
00flynn
... [
2010-12-18 10:14:50]
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Re: Back to Black and White
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by JohnnyFallen on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 10:25:28 AM AEST
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| Whoever told you you cannot write was wrong. This is good from my point of view. Let's what else you have in that mind of yours that you can write about and the rest of us can see your talent. :) |
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Re: Back to Black and White
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by RowenM on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 01:04:20 PM AEST
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Don't let anyone tell you that you can't do it.
This is marvelous.
I really liked it.
I do hope i get to read some more of your work! |
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Re: Back to Black and White
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by Twitch06 on
Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 10:20:03 PM AEST
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| i really feel what you have written, its almost exact .... and you write really good too :) made my heart beat fast and drop too - its reall good |
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Re: Back to Black and White
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by T-Bear on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 04:54:00 AM AEST
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| Liked it alot! You put your feelins down and you can feel them when you read it. Good job! |
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