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Am I Cruel?
Contributed by
RowenM
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Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:45:03 PM in AEST
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Once there was this cockroach,
hideous to my sight.
I stepped on it,
I crushed it over,
I killed it.
Now there is this other cockroach,
I see it as of now.
It goes running and running.
But I can't seem,
to want to follow her.
I have no desire,
no emotions toward her at all.
What really happened back then,
when I killed the other one?
Was it her fate, to harshly die,
while this ones is to freely roam?
Am I cruel by nature?
Am I cruel at all?
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RowenM
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2010-12-18 16:45:03]
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Re: Am I Cruel?
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by duff on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:52:32 PM AEST
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Interesting write and very imaginative. The thought of a wrinkle in time showing itself one day. I like this write because it leaves the reader with the thought of possibility. Well done.
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Re: Am I Cruel?
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 07:08:10 PM AEST
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| It is a very interesting write and well thought through and I think so many of us inter this thought pattern at least once. We loss so much with each one we loss that its hard to have anything else to give. A good read that puts the mind in thought, thanks. Steve |
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