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drowning man
Contributed by
poeticjestix
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Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 04:29:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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a distant sea broke on his heart and washed away his yearning soul
Its salty mass polluted parts and the pressure it constricted all
He slowly sank through icy depths his struggling body fighting cold
his tears not showing as he wept, his screams the bubbles ate them whole
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Re: drowning man
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dirkj on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 04:39:14 AM AEST
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| Very sad piece of writing but i enjoyd it. well done |
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Re: drowning man
(User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 12th February 2019 @ 09:48:35 PM AEST
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Many drown their sorrows on dry land.
The struggle is real either way.
Very interesting write and well written.
Life ain/'/t all a cake walk! |
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