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Keep it Comin
Contributed by
Njd1105
on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 01:37:09 PM in AEST
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Keep it comin, I got the goin
Rest the favored, Underdogs glowin
Lose all the future, Win all the past
Time movin slow, Life movin fast
Fly to the next page, Swim to the end
Breathe im here, Voices start to mend
Plenty of love, Empty of hate
Written with blood, She cleans my slate
Send me to sleep, Send me away far
Vultures eat on the weak, Open bar
Stars make no sense, Clouds make rain
Friends needed, To remove the pain
Guide me home, Steer me to you
Tired of the old, Ready for the new.
NjD
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2010-12-20 13:37:09]
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Re: Keep it Comin
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by Mexy on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 02:37:46 PM AEST
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| nice flow, very simple but powerful |
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