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Please hear my shout
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 06:14:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Crack open another bottle,
I'll deal with it tomorrow,
Spark another coffin nail,
Tomorrow never comes,
So I can't fail,
Take my meds I'll get better,
'til they're just another upper,
Sear my septum once again,
Pop a pill and smack a vein,
Have a toke,a smoke,a bong,
I think I know where I'm going wrong...
...what was it I was just thinking?
I'm sure it was inspired,
But now I'm sinking,
I'm strangely troubled and full of doubt,
This ain't what I wanted,
Please hear my shout,
But no one hears,
I'm all alone,
'til they find me,
Rotting in my home.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-21 06:14:10]
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Re: Please hear my shout
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:29:15 AM AEST
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| wow!! This is deep and faintly disturbing. I love the rhythm of this and the rhyme is great. I hope you feel better soon, merry Christmas and please keep writing and posting. |
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