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Death
Contributed by
vydana
on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Death is coming closer everyday,
In the ground we will all soon lay,
When, where, and how we can decide,
So from death we should never hide.
Life isn't always a happy place,
To the day of death some will race,
By their own hand they will die,
So everyday they will no longer cry.
Smiling and happy I will no longer pretend,
Death would be a means to an end,
Suicide is a means to death,
I smile, as I take my last breath.
I slain myself to end my saddening pain,
My tears have fallen for so long like rain.
I'm done with this life and this hurt forever,
Unto death I will now endeavor.
Copyright ©
vydana
... [
2003-04-22 04:05:00]
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Re: Death
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 05:37:50 AM AEST
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Sadness imbred, into a story of torment loneliness,
Liked this poem.
But before death takes a hold,
I look forward to more words from you to unfold,
Cant wait to see what else you will write was cool. |
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Re: Death
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 06:26:21 AM AEST
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| Death is a sad thing, but your write is wonderful.. keep em coming on on other topics also.. . venkat |
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Re: Death
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by M on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 07:08:58 AM AEST
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| good write, death is inevitable, so i agree, we should not hide from it. |
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Re: Death
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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so sad but well written. Keep writing it makes things happier.
Michelle |
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Re: Death
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 03:12:57 AM AEST
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| this poem is very truthful, sometimes life isnt and the world isnt a good or happy place to be in, and everyone dies, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Death
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by Jilli_bean on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:17:01 PM AEST
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| good job...a sad...yet very truthful piece of work ...i loved it...great job |
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