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Time
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 01:04:25 AM in AEST
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When my time is said and done
And I can no longer stand my ground
When the lord says its my time
Please let no machines attached be found
Please just let me go in my peace
No doctors, just me myself and I
Dont let the suffering linger on
Just upon my bed, is where I want to die
Please respect all of my wishes
This is all of you I ask
My will is written and ready
For the day that I will pass
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2010-12-23 01:04:25]
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Re: Time
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:11:49 AM AEST
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is this what is called a pre requiem. I hope your friends and family follow your request.
by the way a`Well written poem |
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Re: Time
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 03:23:49 PM AEST
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Well done with the writing but you best not go any where any time soon.
Luv, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Time
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by Tarheel_Treat on
Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 02:26:54 PM AEST
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| Not only do I feel with you on your wishes, I really enjoyed L6. The possession of "peace" really pushes the idea of you wanting no interference when it's time to go. Good job! Thanks for the read! :-) |
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