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Wish I Could
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 06:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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i wish i could sing a song to our story a simple melody that touches the heart of you and me so that the coldness disappear so that the emptiness are filled
i wish i could sing the chords of what your heart wants to hear but i know i failed when my voice no longer bring a smile to you
i wish i could i wish we could if only we could
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Re: Wish I Could
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 06:42:42 PM AEST (User
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Sincere and heartfelt. A few tweaks with language (singulars and plurals), and you join the lexicon of broken-hearted poets.
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