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Since I Lost You
Contributed by
Rx1471
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Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:29:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I spent a long time wondering
My mind just would sleep
I spent so many nights
So alone and cold
Since that day
Years fly so by so fast
Only to be over before you can truely live
Under blackened skies I lay
Beneath the darkened sky I dwell
Every second passes without due care
You never said it would be like this
Once a light amonst the shadows
Now just a hole in the sky
Darkness creeps back into my mind
Convincing me it was right
Only the pain is real
May death come quickly
Pay my price and begone
All I want is the end
Relentless the memories come
Even as I die
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Rx1471
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2010-12-23 17:29:43]
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Re: Since I Lost You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd December 2010 @ 05:47:00 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Since I Lost You
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 02:49:30 AM AEST
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Such saddness in this one
well done |
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Re: Since I Lost You
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:44:01 AM AEST
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| The pain that comes with losing someone is one of the hardest things a person can deal with in life. I wish you all the best, and hope that you can move on and try to find a decent person to fill that hole. And try to have some fun! |
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