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I'm lost and unbalanced.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 08:11:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I look back with remorse,
I couldn't change your course,
But one thing is true,
I'm still in love with you.
In darkness I wander,
Since you stole my thunder,
Don't know what to do,
All I see is you.
I'm lost and unbalanced,
My sentiments challenged,
I'm struggling through,
All because of you.
So I drift through the days,
And count the ways,
In which I love you.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-24 08:11:13]
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Re: I'm lost and unbalanced.
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 07:55:04 PM AEST
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sadly flowing
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emotionally charged,
well done. |
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Re: I'm lost and unbalanced.
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 07:00:06 AM AEST
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Brutally painful and beautiful piece...I know because I wear these same moccassins....
Keep up the posts...
Steve |
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Re: I'm lost and unbalanced.
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by duff on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 03:51:08 PM AEST
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A fine write taking us readers on a journey of a heart struggling to cope with loss. Smooth lines and a nice rhythm to this piece. Well done.
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