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The Reading
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 10:57:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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she told me
she was
Romani
not
Gypsy
that her
mother's mother
told Houdini
he would
die from the inside
that her
mother
told Kennedy
not to
ride in the open
she told me
i would live
a
long
long
life
and that there was
nothing
she could do about it
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
... [
2010-12-24 10:57:30]
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Re: The Reading
(User Rating: 1 )
by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 09:17:43 AM AEST
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| I like it!!! |
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Re: The Reading
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by mcnickname on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 10:30:59 AM AEST
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| I actually really like your writing style. Would be interesting to see you take on an emotional issue... Good work though! |
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Re: The Reading
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by kleetas on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 10:59:13 AM AEST
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| Romani women like Romani men,but the Romani lovers are still my best friends...keep the flow goin'! |
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Re: The Reading
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by ming on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 11:58:05 AM AEST
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Loved it all...but for the lowercase i.
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Re: The Reading
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by Spike on
Monday, 21st November 2011 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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when a snippet becomes everything, a recollection expansive, then you know that you have stumbled upon really, really good poetry. well done.
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