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I am alive
Contributed by
hungarianhaze
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Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 07:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Desperate cries angry with the faceless
All I am , and all the love
hungers in the mire
A will frozen in the wind
not to hide
for you and mine
Hear my reflections of my cries
I am alive
Cast in shame..
For your dismay
Point at me too decrease the silence
Malodorous I cant deny you
Juggling the thought of reason
Is this pity?
Hiding inside myself
how could i see inside you
Like the childrens words who fell into apathy
And the ears that for shadowed this yearning
I am alive
The ground nows topples from above
swallowing the emotions left behind
Breaking...
The cries bellowed into sun
burning all that I kept inside
I kneel to you in mourning
Desperate to hear your vents
the vents that triggered this puzzle of unperturbed bliss
when will you see
I am alive
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2010-12-26 19:24:53]
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Re: I am alive
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 08:53:05 PM AEST
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Well a fool would think u r dead cause this is an incredible write. Awesome.
Good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: I am alive
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 09:29:20 AM AEST
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| Wow... that was absolutely amazing. It was so beautifully written, with depth in every passage. I loved every minute of it, and you finished it perfectly with the last line! I can feel your anguish. I also had a woman that did not appreciate me. It is best to forget about such people, as they will just use you. |
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