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Boys Like Me
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 02:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You walked into the room and the veins pulsated on my neck, fascination's flowing as I watched the ones you reject. From station to station you are floating upon angel wings... never knowing thee effect that you have on boys like me.
You are a contemporary creature with film star features, I wanna drink from the cup that sensations flow into as we kiss. Illusions are taking over I dream of us undercovers melting so slowly as we become lovers, and I don't know you and you don't know me and we never ever met but I I think I love you.
You talk in stereo you're the DJ spinning sensations round and round, you are the one you're the star boys like me wanna be where ever you are. Upon angel wings you float looking so heavenly... and you don't even know the effect that you being you is having.
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by DrogedaRain on
Monday, 27th December 2010 @ 07:09:57 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful, and if you are truly longing for this one you write about then let your agony go and tell them so, then your life can continue to flow~! God Bless |
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 04:12:49 AM AEST (User
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hmmm some serious writing here, nice poem, well done |
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 09:55:23 AM AEST (User
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Hummm, I'm speechless.
twinkle,
twinkle, twwiiiiinkleeee
Wow
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:38:59 AM AEST (User
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This is fantastic writing, strong, emotionally charged and brilliantly executed. Well done. |
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by RowenM on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 04:14:31 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully written.
A lot of heart in it!! |
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Re: Boys Like Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 17th January 2011 @ 09:57:34 AM AEST (User
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That was pretty good :) |
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