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Familiar Tears
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:44:15 AM in AEST
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You, my dear, will always be the one--
The one to make me come undone.
There's something haunting in your tears
That somehow screams of my own worst fears.
I've said it once and I'll say it still
For you, my darling, I would kill.
I'll still save you now, wait and see.
I realize I couldn't let go because in you, I saw me.
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ChaosFactor
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2010-12-29 01:44:15]
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Re: Familiar Tears
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 03:16:44 AM AEST
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Superb!! this rhymes and flows so sweetly,
I like your style. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Familiar Tears
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 04:14:08 AM AEST
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| A love so strong, coupled by devotion, and having a lot in common. Sounds like a strong basis for a happy life. Good luck helping whoever it is :) |
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Re: Familiar Tears
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by xbabycyutie on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:34:52 PM AEST
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its a short poem but it says so much.
I loove the last line (:
keep writing! |
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