|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
PLASMA FLOATS
Contributed by
sver
on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 03:14:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Like a bikini top
two hills were rising
in a spiral optics. Has
an altruistic vision.
A wildfire erupts between
the thongs of dead.
You have a mobile message
not to praise the sunrise
in the woods.
I am watching the flames
with a fury
of a wounded tiger.
Satish Verma
Copyright ©
sver
... [
2010-12-29 03:14:55]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: PLASMA FLOATS
(User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 03:59:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Watching the world that looks like a bikini burn with a vengeance. Interesting. |
|
|
Re: PLASMA FLOATS
(User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 08:17:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| do i sense pain anger and desire for revenge, or just laying in wait ready to pounce. |
|
|
Re: PLASMA FLOATS
(User Rating: 1 )
by ming on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 09:25:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I enjoyed this very much...it made me think! I can't wait for more...
ming |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
