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Remember The Time
Contributed by
trisha
on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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AS I Sit Here
Wondering What Went Wrong
Feeling Upset
I Was So Close To You At One
Point Of Time.
Feeling Pain I Live Sad days
When I Think Of You
I Feel You Are Lost In Life.
AS If I Was Look At A Picture
Of You In My Life From Day One.
Just Cry Wanted A Chance I've Told
Myself Give Him Time.
EveryDay That Passed SomeThing
Tells Me That Love Will Find It's Way
To End.
Which It Seems Like It Already Has
Wont ForGet You Nor All The Good Time
We Had.
You Might Be Thinking It Will Cause Ain
To Tell Me Of Cause Pain But It's Better
Than Hurting EveryDayIs Silence.
Time And Time SomeThing Is Telling Me
I Have To Let Go Even If It Brings Much Pain.
You Will ForGot Seeing How Much I Real;ly
Do Find Always love you.
Copyright ©
trisha
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2003-04-22 11:35:00]
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Re: Remember The Time
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:41:51 PM AEST
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Good poem. I can tell that it was written from your heart.
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Re: Remember The Time
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:43:30 PM AEST
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heartfelt
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Re: Remember The Time
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by Sandra on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 10:57:41 PM AEST
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| I can understand how you feel. Good write. |
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Re: Remember The Time
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:46:31 AM AEST
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| Hi, new friend, Trisha! Life is full of these moments of pain. Good thing to relieve your distress by writing about it. Friend Bizzy |
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Re: Remember The Time
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by AngryPrincess on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 02:00:45 AM AEST
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good poem
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Re: Remember The Time
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by Pigglet on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 03:45:20 AM AEST
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hey this is a really good peom and i know how you feel.
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Re: Remember The Time
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:33:21 PM AEST
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Good write...
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Re: Remember The Time
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by darkkai on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 11:39:07 PM AEST
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i read all your poems. this one really is from that painful past that can be forgiven....in time
keep up the poems
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