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Winter
Contributed by
apricotjam
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Thursday, 30th December 2010 @ 07:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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winter white days beat beat beat
they are so sweet, if only I had someone along
to join my small winter world
cold nips, crunching light, they deceive me into the night
they lead me, back
back, to where I was before
cold nips, winter light, lead me to where I was al-right
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Re: Winter
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by duff on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 12:33:28 AM AEST
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There is a magical feel to this and your imagery helps set the table. Abstract indeed and well done.
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Re: Winter
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by Brianimal on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 07:47:18 AM AEST
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| Duffs comment says it best. A picture painted with little words. Incited thought and entertained my imagination. Thanks |
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