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The Death of Love
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:03:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hear the screams, they do not stop,
Reach out of the pain, stop feeling so lost,
Open the fear and rip up remorse,
kill all the tears and stay the course,
Drown in the sorrow, corruption then madness,
Destroyer of love, you revel in sadness,
A pinch, a bite, a slap, a sting,
You demolish the past, and the future it brings,
This hollow abyss, deep in my soul,
Has only one purpose only one goal,
The defeat of love, so peaceful and true.
Im sorry my love its swallowing you.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
... [
2010-12-31 06:03:22]
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Re: The Death of Love
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by Jussy74 on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 07:54:08 AM AEST
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| Very strong and powerful words indeed! |
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Re: The Death of Love
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by Voyager on
Friday, 31st December 2010 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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| it has a great flow to it and a sense of power. |
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Re: The Death of Love
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by Brianimal on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 07:23:44 AM AEST
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| this was a good read! Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: The Death of Love
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by bwright824 on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 10:45:18 AM AEST
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I read this and got the chills, 2 thumbs up from me!
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