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Night Thief
Contributed by
PuppetJack
on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 11:55:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Night Thief
There it stood...
beneath the trees
the moonlight shining radiant beams!
from atop the mountain
stood a guard on patrol
watching, and watching
the palace below...
This is it
I thought to myself
my only chance
I must take flight now!
so I stood my ground
and sprinted towards the door
the lock was locked!
and my heart nearly dropped
How now will I pass this door?
Break right through
and recover my toes?
It is dazed and deficient
but it must be decent!
So I grabbed my body by the hair of my chin
and broke right through
no more is too be said
I got to my feet and dashed on lightly
the fire was burning
and light gleamed brightly
and there on the table of wood
was the key to this mission
I had spent on nightly
I grabbed it with swift motion
and exited the door before anyone
could say anymore...
Puppetjack 2011
Copyright ©
PuppetJack
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2011-01-01 11:55:16]
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Re: Night Thief
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by Black13 on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 03:06:58 PM AEST
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| Few more stanzas could have given it a finish. Though now it really leaves you wondering how metaphoric or literal you were being. |
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